Revision – Essay 3 Proposal – Recycling: Maybe a challenge but we are ready!

Essay 3 Proposal – Recycling: Maybe a challenge but we are ready! My dear Fairbanksans: Fairbanks is a city that is not in the mind of too many people, either because they don’t care, they haven’t heard about it, or because we are too far.  It is time for us, Fairbanksans, to take action, we [...]

Revision – Essay 2 Book Review – Albatross: The way we impact their world

Albatross is a powerful bird that flies up to 25,000 miles to find food for their chicks, and whose majesty is endangered due to their increased vulnerability to modern conditions.  Albatrosses nest on small islands throughout the sea and travel thousands of miles to be able to eat and feed their chicks.  This book contains [...]

Revision Essay 1 Cause Effect – Factory – Farmed animal agriculture: A source of water pollution

Essay 1 Cause/Effect – Factory-Farmed Animal Agriculture: A source of water pollution Somewhere in the United States animals are being raised in confined pens, packed really tightly.  To prevent animals from getting sick they are dosed with antibiotics.  Some of the waste produce by these thousands of animals goes into manure lagoons that cause air [...]

Research Project – Final -Food Industry

There are many factors that contribute to water pollution, but the one that would be discussed is animal agriculture.  We are not talking about small farms; we are talking about industries whose only purpose is to raise animals for profit.  These animals are raised in large quantities, and in the past, in some places, they [...]

Reading Responses 11-15

Article #1 Nell Greenberg in his article “Captain Charles Moore” talks about a large amount of plastic debris found in the Pacific Ocean known as “Pacific garbage patch”, and the impact plastics have in our oceans and the sea life.  He also talks about the importance of raising awareness and do our part.  This article [...]

Lanni Workshop – Draft 2

1. What does the author do particularly well? Be specific. Well organized and the reference are posted.  Also, smooth transitions. 2. Ask the author for one particular concern that s/he had about the draft. Examine that area and see if you can offer the author helpful suggestions. No concerns 3. Does the author clearly express [...]

Essay 3 Proposal – Recycling: Maybe a challenge but we are ready!

Essay 3 Proposal – Recycling: Maybe a challenge but we are ready! My dear Fairbanksans: Fairbanks is a city that is not in the mind of too many people, either because they don’t care, they haven’t heard about it, or because we are too far.  It is time for us, Fairbanksans to take action, we [...]

Draft 2: Food Industry

There are many factors that contribute to water pollution, but the one that would be discussed is animal agriculture.  We are not talking about small farms; we are talking about industries whose only purpose is to raise animals for profit.  These animals are raised in large quantities, and in the past, in some places, they [...]

LANNI WORKSHOP DRAFT 1

Overall 1. What does the author do particularly well? Be specific. Citations and flowing from one paragraph to the next.  Also, nice closing statement. 2. Ask the author for one particular concern that s/he had about the draft. Examine that area and see if you can offer the author helpful suggestions. N/A Thesis 3. Does [...]

Research Project Draft 1: Food Industry

There are many factors that contribute to water pollution, but the one that would be discussed is animal agriculture.  We are not talking about small farms; we are talking about industries whose only purpose is to raise animals for profit.  These animals are raised in large quantities, and in the past, in some places, they [...]